This is a decent start on the case studies Tre. You need to analyse the editing more closely in both music videos, considering cutting pace, rate and rhythm. you haven't analyseed mise en scene in sufficient depth and you could think more about representation for each. At time you're a little muddled between the two videos. Proof read. Write more specifically about elements you could use and adapt in your own video. And do a third case study. Vanessa
This is improved now and the third case study is a decent quality. You have thought about representation and mise en scene, and you have attempted to think about elements you could use in your own work. This could still be much clearer and more specific- referring to actual shots, editing, elements of mise en scene. V
This is a decent start on the case studies Tre. You need to analyse the editing more closely in both music videos, considering cutting pace, rate and rhythm. you haven't analyseed mise en scene in sufficient depth and you could think more about representation for each. At time you're a little muddled between the two videos. Proof read. Write more specifically about elements you could use and adapt in your own video. And do a third case study. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteThis is improved now and the third case study is a decent quality. You have thought about representation and mise en scene, and you have attempted to think about elements you could use in your own work. This could still be much clearer and more specific- referring to actual shots, editing, elements of mise en scene. V
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